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A poem again (:
I'm not very sure about this, especially since the repetitions, which are a main part of the poem, are, well repetitions, so I don't really know whether I went overboard with them...
Your thoughts?
I'm not very sure about this, especially since the repetitions, which are a main part of the poem, are, well repetitions, so I don't really know whether I went overboard with them...
Your thoughts?
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The repetition works well. It creates a nice structure and builds focus such as with "somewhere crying" "somewhere dying" and "fading "aiding". The 2 single lines that end each verse add a striking impact that tie the poem together.
It's steeped in emotion which I love and you can sense the raw emotion it has been written with.
It's steeped in emotion which I love and you can sense the raw emotion it has been written with.