Ah I will wait for it and my future works will undoubtedly be better
I just got some "revelation"
And by what I said and you pointed out, I meant that not everyone can handle simplicity and portray things as they are. Like you expressed tea time in a way that it felt natural to me that you feel that way or it felt as if you were telling the truth rather than making things up.
I see, thank you! Almost all of my poems are a result of something I have experienced myself (like "Untitled"), something I feel like (like "Roundabout" or "That Thing with Feathers"), something I observed and drew my conclusions from (like "Ambitions"), or simply formed from somthing that instantly inspired me to write (like "Jellyverse"). I always write because the words suddenly come to me out of a rush of inspiration, or because I finally found the words I was looking for to express something in particular. So there's always some kind of "truth" in my poems, because I write about something that is true to myself. Well, excluding "Jellyverse", that one is simply... my vivid imagination running rampart.
Ah I see by the way Mr. Ohm was the Emoticon I should have used but then again Ohm reminds me of Resistance!
On wards... Ah so that is how you write? My works are more based on titles. Titles or snippets hit me and I write on that. Like "A quills Lament" "waiting for her to come this way" "A tale untold" (to be posted soon )"Sweet Bough of Autumn leaves" (have to work on that) and many others I feel like I am missing a work or two of yours from the list My latest work which won't come online is also similar and it... I shall myself say, is good.
And I like Jellyverse -gasp- we should also have a Muffinverse!
While this is old, I am not posting "A tale untold" for two reasons... one... if I post it, it won't remain a tale untold... and secondly, I cannot seem to complete it! I am running out of rhymes lol but I can send you a stanza or two as a note if you would like.
Oh no, "a tale untold" will definitely be good in my opinion but it is another work that I was talking about which won't make it on dA. And i just don't know most of my "accomplished works" are off dA till now and that work sits on top. Do keep in mind that I am giving my perspective and it might not be good at all in general view. That I am adding this because people in general consider calling ones own work "good in my opinion" as boasting.
IF you want I can give you the title in a note although that won't say much about the work
So you making one? not BAKING, like sketching one?
Oh, I didn't mean "A tale untold", I meant the other one you mentioned at the end^^ Hm, you're right with that. On the other hand, I do think you can be proud of your work, I didn't see one so far that was "bad". Also, noone is perfect, and everyone is entitled to make mistakes But I get what you mean, I'm often hesitant about adding something here, too.
Only if you want
Hadn't thought of baking one, though that's kind of a neat idea, too Hmmm, I'm not sure, maybe...
When I'm at work, I prefer water. When I visit coffee shops, I'll drink hot chocolate, but usually never tea or coffee. I went through a latte phase in my second year at uni, but since then have really gone off the taste/smell of coffee.
It sometimes is, but I've adjusted pretty well since I noticed I got it. It certainly explains my hate for apples and pears, since those are the fruit with the highest fructose level (the sugar my body doesn't tolerate that well is fructose, which is in normal sugar as well)
I love this. It's quite simplistic but you successfully gathered what "tea time" is in a few short lines. You wrote something meaningful that makes your fellow tea drinking reader fall back on memories they may not often consider. Thank you for a beautiful piece.